"Your family is God'

題目：

"Your family is God's gift to you, as you are to them."是1984年諾貝爾和平獎得主Desmond Tutu就曾個人與家人關係說過一句話。請認真品味這句話，然後按要求用英語寫一篇短文。
內容要求：
（1）你對這句話的理解：
（2）結合具體事例說明；
（3）恰當的結尾
注意：1。短文開頭已給出，不計入總次數；
2.詞中不能出現考生的具體信息。
3.詞數：120左右
Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1084, once said,"Your family is God's gift to you, as you are to them." It tells us that _________________
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請老師給出2-3篇範文，以便啓發思路，寫得有特色！謝謝！

解答：

解題思路： 寫英語作文高分 1. 審題，確立文章框架：注意總分總三段(首尾呼應)： （第一段交代中心思想，第二段具體展開，第三段總結收尾，提出希望）技巧： 2. 寫好簡單句：用地道的英語表達出基本要點。 3. 組織語言：增加高檔短語和句型，變換句首和連貫詞，名言一句畫龍點睛。
解題過程：
範文一、
Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said, "Your family is God's gift to you, as you are to them." It tells us the deep meaning between our family and us. No matter how poor our family is, or how hard we struggle in our tough life, our family is always there, supporting us without hesitation.
Years ago, in my childhood, I fought with some bad boys and got badly hurt. When I got home, mom and dad felt shocked and then took me to the hospital. The operation cost them all they had. Luckily, my life was saved. Afterwars, dad went to talk with the bad boys' family and settled it down. Although he was only a poor farmer, shy with few words, he stood up for me in time of danger. I was deeply moved and encouraged. Since then, I have been braver and more confident.Dad loves me and often says every child is the family's pride.
My family is God's gift. I feel gateful to it and make up my mind to protect and cherish it.
範文二、
Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said,"Your family is God's gift to you, as you are to them." It tells us that parents are to us what lighthouses are to ships. Without parents, we would get lost when we grow up; without us, parents would feel sad and lonely.
I'm the pearl in my parents eyes. As a child, I was slow. Alghough struggling, I couldn't study well at school and fell far behind , often failing exams. So bitter was the feeling of being defeated that I thought of giving up. To encourage me, they told me to fill a glass with fast running water. Unexpectedly, I found however hard I tried, my glass was only half full. Only then did I realize what I needed to learn well were my devotion and right ways. With their help, I mastered the methods of learning and caught up with my classmates gradually. Now I have become a top student in my class, which has also become their pride and joy.
There is no doubt that both parents and we are of great impotance to each other. Let's be grateful and cherich it in our hearts!