幫我檢查一下英語的語法錯誤

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幫我檢查一下英語的語法錯誤
Summer vacation wills to an end immediately,this is the last summer vacation in my life,also the most miraculous.The summer vacations have never been more meaningful than this one,has never been a holiday can be so long,which is thanks for the Beijing Olympics.Of course,I would also like to thanks for everyone around.
Each time to leave,the weather is always become cool,Like to see my off.Is my future will have such a holiday?such youth,such irritable and depressed,such joy and tears,such happy and pleasant.Perhaps after some years,when I recall this busy and miraculous time,perhaps it will be profoundly remembered.
Anyway,my holiday will be over soon,goodbye,my friends,good-bye,my Last Summer Vacation.
我的英語不是一般的差勁！而這個文大多數是機器翻譯。錯誤較多。

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我的修改（英語專業畢業生):
Summer vacation will COME to an end immediately AND this is the last ONE in my life,SO IT IS also the most miraculous.SUMMER VACATIONS BEFORE have never been THAT meaningful AS this one.THANKS TO THE OLYMPICS,OR IT WOUDN'T HAVE BEEN THAT LONG.Of course,I would also like to thank for everyone THAT AROUND ME.
EVERY time LEAVING the weather always becomeS cool AND IT SEEMS LIKES SEEING my off.WILL my future have such a holiday AGAIN?SO YOUNG,such irritableNESS and depressION,SO MUCH joy and tears,SO happy and PLEASING.MAYBE I recall this busy and miraculous time AND it will be profoundly remembered AFTER SOME YEARS.
Anyway,my holiday will END soon,goodbye,my friends,good-bye,my Last Summer Vacation.