求英語高手,幫我修改一下這篇英語作文.急.快,就今天

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求英語高手,幫我修改一下這篇英語作文.急.快,就今天
My Summer Holiday
Everyyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,we
must wear T-shirt and shorts.This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.So I don’t have summer homework.It makes me feel very happy.But I
also enrolled an English
class.In English class,and I get to know some new friends.They and I get along very happy .In my spare time,I always listen
to music and read books,sometimes I ride my bicycle.Oh,My bicycle is very
good.Time passes very quickly,Summer has passed half.I finally have the opportunity to travel.I am
going to visit the Yellow
Mountain tomorrow.I am
going to enjoy the beauty of the Yellow
Mountain.I hope that I
have a pleasant journey.And you?
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解答：

every year 分開
do many 分開
第二排的holiday後應該是句號,接下來的we大寫
T-shirt應該是T-shirts
This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.應該是
Before this summer holiday,I just graduated from elementary
school.
In English class,and I get to know some new friends
改爲In the English class,加上the
還有就是去掉and,
還有就是敘述你在課堂里的事情全部應該是過去時態,你都沒有注意,太多動詞了,我就不一一改了.