英語作文改一下語法錯誤謝謝,順便補充一下標題?The most ________ news during the hol

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英語作文改一下語法錯誤謝謝,順便補充一下標題?The most ________ news during the holiday
The most ________ news during the holiday
Since the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn’tany movement until it released its first tablet computer last week.In my view,Surface can’t be sold well in a short time,and it hasn’t ability to competewith the iPad.Maybe some people like trying something new,but they will giveup the Surface soon because of its experience.
Why I say that?Though the hardware of theSurface is powerful,but the operation system on the Surface Windows had seemednever fit to the tablet devices.However Microsoft barely did it and it’s badfor the Surface.
The same as Ayala thought,I won’t buy aSurface right now and I’m sticking with Apple.

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Since the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn't had any jiant movement until last week when it released its first tablet Surface.(從句用since,主語一定要用完成時態.）In my view,Surface won't sell well （賣得好與不好,英文習慣上用主動語態）in a short time and it won't be able to compete with the iPad (沒有能力或無法,用hasn't ability 是典型中式英文）.Maybe some people would like to try something new,but they will surely give up the Surface soon because of their unfavorable experience.(would like to try 比like trying更能強調動作「去嘗試」；誰的體驗?自然是那些人的體驗.用its experience顯然是錯誤.）
Why should I say that?Though Surface's hardware is powerful,the operating system of Windows does not seem to fit the tablet devices.(用 though就不用but,用but就不能用 though,兩者只能擇一.）Microsoft barely made its OS work for Windows,however,it is not efficient enough for Surface.
Just as Ayala thought what Surface is,I won't buy a Surface right now.I'll stick with Apple.