英語作文求大神修改一下

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英語作文求大神修改一下
The one who encouraged me most That year we are also very confuse,don't know what his future will be?Because of unknown let's fear,because fear let's afraid of walking.But she let me know to be a brave man,don't be afraid!
She always pony-tailed sit next to my efforts to learn every day,she is my same table.For a while I feel confused about my future,don't know what you can do in the future,become a what kind of person,so I asked her to you accept any plans for your future but she told me she didn't know and cross the bridge when you come to it.Don't get freaked and give up Her words let me suddenly understand,why should we care about so much,brave forward constantly move forward,don't fear for the future,as long as we stick to the end will be a success

解答：

The one encouraged me most
We were very confused in that year, We don't know what his future will be..
Because the unknown things made us afraid of walking.But she made me know how to be a brave man,and not to fear!
She always sit next to me with pony-tailed and study hard.She is my deskmate.
我受不了了!這明顯就是用什麼鬼翻譯器從中文直譯過來的.我這樣還要猜意思.你還不如直接發中文好了!
再問： Brave the pursuit of the things they want, as long as we stick to the end will be a success 勇敢的追求自己想要的東西,只要我們堅持到最後便會成功 ——————這個這麼寫能好一點，請幫忙修改下
再答： To chase for the things we want bravely,and we will succeed in the end as long as we persist.