英語演講,語法錯誤也請指出,稍加美句也無妨,I have a dream

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英語演講,語法錯誤也請指出,稍加美句也無妨,I have a dream
英語演講,語法錯誤也請指出,稍加美句也無妨,
I have a dream
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen It's a great honor to be here.I've been looking foward to this moment for a long time.Today,my topic is:I have a dream.
Now I want to say something about my dream.What is my dream?I often ask myself.In my mind,everyone shall have his own dream.I think that having a dream means that we have an idea,and then we will do all the things to achieve the target.As long as we have a goal to be realized,we won’t be blind at least.
My dream is to become a great engineer in the Apple Inc.Of course,it's really hard to be an engineer.But I will do whatever I can do to realize my dream.
I love The Apple Inc.Not only because of its wonderful products,but also because of a great person called Steve Jobs.I have read his biography and I really admire his enthusiasm and ideas for a technological innovation.
Even though he is dead,I still want to follow him and design the best products for people all over the world.I believe one day,I can realize my dream!
That's all.Thank you for paying attention.

解答：

and then we will do all the things to achieve the target.改成and then we will do our best to achieve the target.
Even though he is dead中dead改成gone,這表達人物的離去沒那麼生硬.
總體寫得都不錯,意思很明確.祝你演講成功.