幫我看看這篇英語作文有什麼問題吧~（單詞拼寫和語法）【記敘文】

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幫我看看這篇英語作文有什麼問題吧~（單詞拼寫和語法）【記敘文】
.In my summer holidays,I did a lot of things.Apart form doing my homework,reading an English novel,watching TV and doing some housework,I went on a trip to Qingdao.It is really a beautiful city.There are many places of interest to see.But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early.I was very happy because it was a fine day.By the time I got to the beach,the clouds on the horizon were turning red.In a little while,a small part of the sun was gradually appearing.The sun was very red,not shining.It rose slowly.At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea,just like a deep-red ball.At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!

解答：

不錯,不過深紅色不是deep red,是dark red.