幫我改英語作文,英語太差了,幫我改下語法什麼的,能提供長期修改的好心人留下郵箱什麼的,

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幫我改英語作文,英語太差了,幫我改下語法什麼的,能提供長期修改的好心人留下郵箱什麼的,
1網絡已經深深地影響著我們的生活
2然而,網絡世界非常的複雜
3面對資訊時代的今天,我們該如何面對
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Following the quickly development of scientific,more different the life we have because of internet.
We not only chat with others in internet but also shopping in it.There are large souce for information and we cauld take it.Under the internet we are reduce the time for get knowledge and more convenient.That also tell we how complex it is.Take careful when you trying to get resource and use it.Do not put it that you had found in all reliable and make a judge from your intelligence.At the last but not the least,we could also help others with the internet,something we had got can share with oters.
I believe we'll have bright life if we could have use intternet correctly.
提供長期修改的好心人留下郵箱什麼的,只是寒假練習

解答：

既然改完了,我就多說幾句.
1.of 連接兩個名詞 , scientific 是形容詞 ,並且本文你所說的internet 是有關technology內容
2.上面改的有錯誤 lives複數指的是生命,所以還是life
3.不是所有名詞前都加 the,.
有幾個點：文章中第一次出現的名詞都不加the,可數名詞單數可用a 或an .
如果不確定是否加the,就別加了,所以是because of internet.
4.如果你想用not only ...but also 句型,記住它們後接的成爲是一樣的,並且如果有重複性的名詞等用it one this that those these 這些代詞代替.
5.under internet 是中國英語,用with 適宜.
所以這句我改爲Not only chatting with others but also shopping we could do with it.
6.and more convenient,你如果要修飾動詞,不能用形容詞,直接副詞conveniently.
7.動詞後一般接賓格,（好像是這個名字,我忘了）就是us you him her them me .
8.過去完成時一般是過去的過去,所以我的理解是如果你這篇文章沒有用過去時,就不要輕易用過去完成時
建議：
1.一篇文章不要用一個詞多次,要知道變換,所以總結同義詞很重要.
比如internet 可以用websites online cyberline
2.多記些詞組,注意基本的名詞與介詞,動詞與介詞,形容詞與介詞的搭配.
3.多背,多跟讀英語教材課文,你會有一定的語感.
PS:希望我的這些嘮叨對你有用.