麻煩各位英語高手幫我看一下這篇文章的語法和部分時態的錯誤,指出以便改正,

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麻煩各位英語高手幫我看一下這篇文章的語法和部分時態的錯誤,指出以便改正,
Adam Lambert-my favorite singer
Ilove music very much,and Adam Lambert is my favorit singer,I love him and he's songs.I think Adam Lambert and he's songs are prefact!
He was born in 1982,he entered for a show progranm in 2009,but he won the second prize in this competition.What a large pity!But they said that he was the best singer in this competition's history,and he is better than the first singer!
He has three disc now,but my favorite disc is 《season 8 favorit performances》.Wo!It's really great!Those songs aren't his,but I think he sings better than former sings.And my favorite songs are《Feeling good 》《Mad world》《the tracks of my tears》……They are all wonderful!
Afew days ago,he sang the 《time foe miracles》for 《2012》,It was really good to listen and moved!I think it was a great success!And the song's key was really high.
I think he is too handsome,his eyes is really beautiful,and he is tall.I love him very much!
I think he is the greatest singer.I hope everyone likes him!
不好意思啊，我現在只是初二，這是我們老師叫我們寫的，我們的語法還沒有學那麼多，如果是中式英語，請多多包含

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那兩個人改的都不行,拼寫錯誤都沒幫你改.根據初二的水平,我幫你全部修改了一下,應該不會過頭.
Adam Lambert,my favorite singer
I love music very much.And Adam Lambert is my favourite singer.I love him and his songs.I think both himself and his songs are perfect!
He was born in 1982.He took part in a competition show in 2009.But he only won the second prize.What a pity!But many people said that he was the best singer in the competition ever; And he was better than the singer who won the first prize!
He has three published album now.My favorite one is "Season 8 Favourite Performances".Wow!It's really great!Those songs aren't sung by him at first,but I think he sings better than the former one.My favourite songs are "Feeling good","Mad world","the tracks of my tears" and so on.They are all wonderful!
A few days ago,he sang the "time for miracles" for the movie,"2012".It was really good to listen and I was moved!I think it was a great success.The song's key is really high.
I think he is very handsome.His eyes are really beautiful.And he is tall.I love him very much!
I think he is the greatest singer.I hope everyone likes him.
我從頭到尾改了一遍,可能還會有些許疏漏,但是基本上沒問題了.記住段與段之間最好隔一行,每段都頂頭寫.不要用書名號,用引號.注意單複數.時態還是把我的不錯的.另外,少用and,really和感嘆號.最好不要用Wow這樣的純口語.建議對照你原來的仔細看一遍,對你會幫助大一些.祝學習順利!