幫我看一下這篇文章是否有什麼語法錯誤或這可以再潤色的

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幫我看一下這篇文章是否有什麼語法錯誤或這可以再潤色的
It talked about The Jacksons』 special experience.Jackson took his children to go camping in the Yellowstone National Park .They met a strange man called Charlie Forster .Charlie told him a big disaster is coming.He said :with strong earthquake,the earth would be destroyed,and all across the world would become sea.There would be no place for people living on.Soon,governments realized that the earth will be destroyed in a very short time.they had to start to build the arks as quickly as they could.At last the disaster was coming.The survivors got through the difficulties with the help of each other.
這是我要用來展示的,好的再追分喏····
再問一個問題 災難片大師 該怎麼說

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通常,一本書或電影的故事敘述用一般現在時.
It is （這裡的it是一本書或一齣電影嗎?如果是,talked要改爲is ) about the(T不必大寫) Jacksons』 special experience.One day（加上One day） Jackson takes his children for a camp（ to go camping 表達顯得累贅,改爲for a camp ）in the Yellowstone National Park .They meet a strange man called Charlie Forster .Charlie tells him a big disaster were（is改爲 were,虛擬語氣）coming.He says that with a （加上a）strong earthquake happening,the earth would be destroyed,and all （across刪去） the world would become a （加上a）sea.There would be no place for people to live in（living改爲to live；on改爲in）.Soon,governments know about that（realized that the earth will be destroyed in a very short time改爲know about that.).They( had to 刪去)start to build the arks as quickly as they can (could改爲can).At last the disaster came（虛擬語氣）.The survivors smooth away（got through改爲smooth away） the difficulties by helping（with the help of改爲by helping ）each other.
修改後完整的全文如下：
It is about the Jacksons』 special experience.One day Jackson takes his children for a camp in the Yellowstone National Park .There they meet a strange man called Charlie Forster .Charlie tells him a big disaster were coming.He says that with a strong earthquake happening,the earth would be destroyed,and all the world would become a sea.There would be no place for people to live in.Soon,governments know about that.They start to build the arks as quickly as they can .At last the disaster came.The survivors smooth away the difficulties by helping each other.
災難片大師：a master of disaster films.
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