l like music very much,pop songs in particular.every evening

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l like music very much,pop songs in particular.every evening then i am doing homework 短文改錯、急求
and at weekends when i at home. i always play some of my favorit songs on my tape recorder.the familiar pattern of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music.now and then i stopped to follow the songs.sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to focus my attention to my homework.she does not like the pop music,like most groun-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the peace music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young.it is certain which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music

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l like music very much,pop songs in particular.Every evening (then改成when) I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加入am) at home.I always play some of my favorite songs (on改成with) my tape recorder.The familiar pattern of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music.Now and then I (stopped改成stop) to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to focus my attention (to改成on) my homework.She does not like (去掉the) pop music,like most grown-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the (peace改成peaceful) music reminds her of (their改成her) beautiful life when she was young.It is certain (which改成that) people of different (age改成ages) understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music
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