一小段話,求修改Accoding to the planning,the western part of the Sou

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一小段話,求修改
Accoding to the planning,the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide bicycle lanes and 7-meters-wide sidewalks.
For the eastern part,the width is 40 meters with nothing different from the western execpt for the greenbelt's width,being 4 meters.
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解答:

Accoding to the planning(用plan就行了), the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide(meters改成meter) greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide(meters改成meter) bicycle lanes and 7-meters-wide(同上) sidewalks.
For the eastern part, the width is 40 meters with nothing different from the western(加上part) execpt for the greenbelt's width, being 4 meters.

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