作文There are three ways to make the Internet safer for your c

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作文There are three ways to make the Internet safer for your children-hardware,softwareand underwea
不要直接翻譯,這是英語看圖作文圖上的文字,我需要理解過的意思,如果有寫好的例文更好
這段話的意思我知道,但就這段話怎麼寫作文?我要具體的理解意,

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Difficulties?
1.讀圖
2.解意
3.謀篇
讀圖
1.漫畫的題目 眼睛
2.漫畫的畫面 細節
3.漫畫的文字 觀點
4.漫畫的誇張 寓意
解意
1.辨明褒貶,找准角度 誇獎褒揚 or 批評諷喻?
2.聯繫生活,明晰主旨 Imagination!
注意:文字說明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切記要認真閱讀!
謀篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
In the picture,there are…/…is (are) doing…
The picture above is about …
…Let’s look at the picture above/first.
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However,this kind of story is performed everywhere.
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicates that we…Nowadays,it is a common phenomenon that…
This is a satirical (諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
Part 3 Give your opinions
I think/believe that
As far as I’m concerned,
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
Only in this way can….
Polish up your article!
1.To use linking words if necessary
2.To use complicated structures if possible
1.To use linking words
表示平行、對等或選擇關係
and,as well as,together with,not only…but also...
表示轉折關係
but,however,in spite of,although,otherwise,while
表示對比關係
on the contrary,instead of,on one hand…on the other hand...
表示因果關係
so,therefore,as a result (of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to.
表示時間、順序關係
first,second …,then,next,finally,for one thing ...for another,in the end,
表示遞進、強調關係
besides,what’s more,in addition,worse still,above all
表示解釋、說明關係
such as,for example,for instance(例如),in other words,and so on
表示結論
in short,in brief,in a word,in general,on the whole,in conclusion
2.To use complicated structures
For most of the parents,it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor.Let’s look at the picture above.Two people are standing in front of a computer,whose monitor is wearing underwear.The woman is staring at the computer,thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware,software and underwear.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear,but it describes vividly parents』 distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem.Concerned about their children’s security,some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -「the hardware solution」; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –「the software solution」; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -「the underwear solution」!
From my point of view,this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society.On one hand,the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites,making it a safer place for all teenagers.On the other hand,it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention.Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously.Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.
再叮囑幾句:
1.保證三要素-體裁、時態、人稱正確
體裁:議論文
時態:一般現在時
人稱:第三人稱
2.避免漫畫類作文的一些常見失誤
1)誤解圖意 大忌!
2) 企圖幽默 可笑!
3)不明寓意 白寫!
4)中心不明 混亂!
3.控制字數(沒話說PK太囉唆)
4.搞一精闢的結尾!

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