|correct the mistakes in the composition|

題目：

|correct the mistakes in the composition|
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[1] As my sincere friends left,I'm now really very fear.
[2] I'm afraid of the changes in my mind,my temperament and behavior.
[3]Most of the people around me now is quiet senseless,even silly.
[4]I terribly feel that I'm short of imagination all the more.
[5]My courage seems have to be forgotten for a long time.
[6]Yeh...its the age of perplexity.Maybe I'm on the wrong path.
[7]I just want to take everything eazy.
[8]But I have some responsibility that I shouldn't,also couldn't abandon.
[9]I will continue doing my way,without any more thinking.
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請挑出這九句的語法錯誤,和語句不流暢之処{用詞意思不夠貼切或者語句表達太繞的},並改正.
註：[9]想表達的是：「我將繼續 做我的事/走我的道路/行從我的方式,不去想太多/不去做多餘的思考」

解答：

1.第一名的話,really和very可去掉其中一個,典型的chinglish,真的很害怕.
2.可以去掉第二個my
3.is 改成are
4.加上評語I
5.改爲seems to have been forgetten
6.Its改爲It's
7.如果不是easy拼錯了的話,試著改everything 爲 things ,不確定
8.responsibility改成複數形式
9.doing in my way,without any more to think about