托福口語第一題 麻煩大家幫我看看如果說成這樣大概能拿多少分,我只有5分,

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托福口語第一題 麻煩大家幫我看看如果說成這樣大概能拿多少分,我只有5分,
Personally,I would have to say that my favorite animal is giant panda.There are several reasons I need to name.First,panda is native to my motherland—China and is the national treasure of my country.Its black and white fur coat makes it quite unique in the world.
Also,pandas are so cute,they are eating bamboo,climbing trees and playing games to pass time.When I first saw a panda in a zoo,it was playing with a ball and often walked towards the window.It seemed to greet me.I was so excited that I fell in love with this lovely animal from that time.You know,a famous Halloween film named kungfu panda depicts this lovely and smart animal.
In addition,panda is an endangered species.We should take good care of pandas indeed.Reasons above are why I love panda most.

解答：

fair左右
開場白囉嗦,而且總字數你大概是說不完的
不建議使用邏輯連接詞,原因直接用first,second
用詞僵化不像是口語而像是寫作
第一個原因展開不充分,還不如不說,建議你潤色下和第三個原因合一下