托福作文的準備you agree or disagree with the following statement?Th

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托福作文的準備
you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.
我的中文思路已經有了.希望幫我用英語稍微拓展一下,不用寫成篇,我想要一些比較重量級的話.
中文框架,首先是否定的.原因如下
第一,許多商家爲了能夠賺的更多的錢,在食品中加添加劑.地溝油,三鹿奶粉.植物上化學藥劑
第二,現在的環境越來越差,種出來的植物受環境的影響質量也不高,海里的汙染也大,吃魚不安全.
第三,快餐越來越多,上班繁忙,社會發展快,快餐店越來越多,沒有時間準備飯菜,出去吃快餐比較多,而快餐多是不健康的食物.

解答：

思路很棒誒~
作爲練習當然可以開外掛查查添加劑地溝油啥啥的英文表達啦
如果考試的時候有完全不會寫的專業名詞最好跳過 不寫比寫錯要好
不過考試的時候一點小錯問題不大啦~
其實能在規定時間內完成作文是一切東東的前提：）
至於你的思路 我把第一點劃到科技頭上去了 所以重點講述三鹿奶粉里的三聚氰胺melamine吧 具體你自己查哈~
以下僅供參考 你寫完最好找老外批改一下 避免Chinglish:P
First of all,while the rapid development in food technology has benefited us in numerous ways,some companies started to illegally add advanced but poisonous additives to food so as to gain as much profit as they can.A recent case involving such malicious deed concerns a well-known brand,Sanlu Milk Power...
Second of all,the increasing amount of pollution has negatively impacted on not only the air we breathe and the water we drink,but our food as well.Mountains of garbage and waste are poured into the earth and the sea,directly resulting in the malnutrition and variation of the plant and animals dwelling in the polluted areas...
Third of all,the prevalence of fast food has caused hazardous obesity both among adults and among children...