托福獨立寫作求思路 Is Working more important than just being with one

題目：

托福獨立寫作求思路 Is Working more important than just being with one’s family

解答：

eing with family mambers is more important:
1 family is the possession you own for lifelong.take an example of you or your friend who work too hard to lose his/her relative and regret having do so
2 spend time on family activity brings you a good mood and then being more healthy.You can have a survey result here to show the poor health condition of workers under great pressure
3 staying with children is crutial for their growth,if not,they will have some emotional illness and have bad ideology...