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大家幫我檢查下這篇文章的語法..錯的給我改下..
here's a gay starin my school.from the first moment He came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People saw him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway...dramaes of him are everywhere...do you wanna know who he is...do you wanna know who he is...He is mr.extra the coquettish material guy this just in...they always got news of my personal things in the net...so he's to sneak away to the Singapura..But surroundings still joked him...do you wanna konw who he is...do you?..He fell in love with a boy,yeah,a same sex guy..what's wrong?...but everytime he makes his lover angry cause of his crazy behaviors...people hate him at most..said that he's a bitch,a erotic prostitute,a whore...pherhaps from the beginning they thought this love must be a joke..do you wanna know who he is..don't think he is innocent...actually,he's me...sweetie's shameless...you told me you love me...oh bullshit..are you kidding me...nomatter how do you think of me.I never mind...but i often cry in the cornor stealthily...in fact..i am a cinderella...alright...don't hurt him anymore..please...thanks..
還有說下中文意思
在我們的學校這裡有一個曾經快樂的人,從他來到這個學校那時,整個學校開始尖叫..而且從未停止...人們用異樣的眼神看他...從各個渠道打聽他的消息..他的八卦新聞遍地都是..你想知道他是誰嗎...他是額外的人..妖艷的拜金女就是拉...人們常把他的私人事情發到網上..所以他不得不逃去SINGAPORE..但他周圍的人依然嘲笑他...你想知道他是誰嗎..他後來愛上了一個男孩..是的一個同性的人..可那有什麼錯嗎...可是每次因爲他的瘋狂行爲..使他的愛人生氣..人們更討厭他了..說他是XXXXXXXX...大約從一開始這段感情就被人們當成一個笑話...你想知道他是誰嗎.你不認爲他很無辜嗎..事實上他就是我...叫SWEETIE的賤人..你說你愛上我了..胡說.你一定在整我..不管他人怎麼看我...我從未介意..但我常偷偷的在角落裡哭泣..說實在的..我是一個可憐的人....不要再傷害我了...求你了...
這是我改編的PIECE OF ME..給朋友的..可惜我英文能力有限..如果錯的多..就幫我翻譯一下..但意思要全..把翻譯的大出來..如果弄的好我還要加分的...

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文章寫得不錯,直接改過了,沒有具體列出.
Here's a gay studying in my school.the moment he came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People looked at him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway...dramas of him are everywhere...do you wanna know who he is...do you wanna know who he is...He is Mr.Extra ,the coquettish material guy .That's just him...they always got news of his personal affairs on the net...so he's to sneak away to Singapora..But people around still joked about him...do you wanna konw who he is...do you?..He fell in love with a boy,yeah,the same sex guy..what's wrong?...but everytime he makes his lover angry out of his crazy behaviors...people hate him even more.saying that he's a bitch,an erotic prostitute,a whore...pherhaps from the beginning they thought this love must be a joke..do you wanna know who he is..don't you think he is innocent...actually,he's me...sweetie's shameless...you told me you love me...oh bullshit..are you kidding me...no matter how do you think of me.I will never mind...but I often cry in the cornor secretly...in fact..I am a cinderella...alright...don't hurt him anymore..please...thanks..