大大們幫忙寫篇120詞英語作文.

題目：

大大們幫忙寫篇120詞英語作文.
You are writing an e-mail message to the manager of an Internet store because you want to complain about an mp3 you bought there.In your message you will include the following points:
1.How you found the product on the internet;
2.The promises made by the store ,e.g.,next day delivery;no charge for shipping ;free repair in one year;a 50-hour battery life;
3.When you actually got it;
4.What you actually paid for it;
5.The actual battery life;
6.You want the money back.

解答：

Dear sir
Resently my friend introduced your website to me to buy an MP3,and I did love one of your product and buy it through internet on 15th July.It costed 120 dollar and no charge for shipping.But when paying,you asked for 130 dollar including 1o dollar for shipping,which did annoy me!And I received the MP3 on 21th July when you』ve promised I would get the MP3 in 2 days.Despite these,battery life of it is only 35 hours,which means 15 hours less than you promised.Altough I can ask for free repaire in one year,I still want to ask for paying back my money of 130 dollar and I will return the MP3 back to you,but you have to pay for the shipping
sincerely
有點熟,記得高三那時寫的是換照相機的.寫的有點急,看看哈 有什麼問題說下~