幫我修改這篇英語作文幫我看看我的這篇文章哪些地方有錯誤,語法錯誤什麼都幫我改過來,或者有更好的寫法也告訴我~weird

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幫我修改這篇英語作文
幫我看看我的這篇文章哪些地方有錯誤,語法錯誤什麼都幫我改過來,或者有更好的寫法也告訴我~
weird dream
I had Two dreams yesterday.
one is about my grandfather,the other one is about my grandmather.
I dreamed that my grandfather planed a war,and my whole family struggled in the war with a lot of bad people.though I didn't know why they were bad .
Then I found my father in a dark room,and someone hide there who was going to shoot him .I tried my best to remind my father that he was in danger,at the same time I get three kettles nearby ,in order to hit the bad man.
Fortunately it worked.
Finally we defeated them.
Then I dreamed that there has something happened on my grandmother.
so I must do something for her.such as making meals and washing clothes.
I felt a lot of love when I did anything for her,as she never want me to be tired .
I waked up in the morning ,felt sorry for them,and thought about what I can do for my grandparents in the real world.

解答：

很好啊,但是語句不通,分段不夠好,寫作文時要用心,反覆修改不必要的不須寫.