幫幫忙改一改本人自己寫了一篇英語作文,不知道有沒有錯誤,希望大家可以幫我修改一下.I can’t stand itI d

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幫幫忙改一改
本人自己寫了一篇英語作文,不知道有沒有錯誤,希望大家可以幫我修改一下.
I can’t stand it
I don’t like waiting for a person.It makes me unhappy.If it happens.I will don’t go out with her.
I can’t stand that a man cuts in line while I wait in line.I think the man has no manner.And it’s the easiest to makes me bristle with anger.When it happens.I think I will tell that man」 Do you know manners?If you know.Please wait in line.If you don’t know.That show you inferior to a primary school student」 Maybe that is no polite.But in fact that’s very active.But I hope nobody force me to use this abrupt method.

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I can’t stand it
I don’t like waiting for a person.It makes me unhappy.If it happens,I will not go out with her.
I can’t stand that a man cuts in line while I wait in the line.I think the man has no manner.And it’s the easiest to make me bristle with anger.When it happens,I think I will tell that man」 Do you know manners?If you know,please wait in line.If you don’t know,that shows you are inferior to a primary school student」 Maybe that is not polite.But in fact that’s very active.But I hope nobody will force me to use this abrupt method.