we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't

題目：

we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as wish.
這句話感覺很彆扭,那錯了,幾個地方錯了

解答：

we wanted to grow up,but when we became older ,we don't have such nice life as we wished.